deviant art





Login
Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour Lost Password?
Deviant Login
Shop
 Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]

More from ~therage3k

Featured in Groups:

Details

March 20, 2009
429 KB
1257×918
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 9
Favourites: 0
Views: 56 (0 today)
Downloads: 0 (0 today)

License

Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
[x]
:icontherage3k:
Been a while since I've drawn someone, and all I had was a mechanical pencil and an eraser... but the good news is, the boat didn't sink after she let me draw her. Then again, there wasn't a kabillion dollar gem to be found either. It was time to "get my draw on"!
:icon:
Add a Comment:
 
love 0 0 joy 1 1 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconpinkparasol:
The shading is very nice, and I love how soft it is. You did an especially good job on the eyes.

--
Shop: [link]
Facebook page: [link]
Reply
:icontherage3k:
~therage3k Jun 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Hee! Thanks. It's always nice to have feedback from truly talented folks on DA :yoda:

--
TheRage3K
~No religion or group should be judged by its extremists
Reply
:iconpinkparasol:
Aww, your welcome ^_^

--
Shop: [link]
Facebook page: [link]
Reply
:iconwhimsical-soul:
~Whimsical-Soul Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
She actually looks a lot like Fergie, with the piercing and the eyes. I like how you did the lips and eyes, but the nose looks a bit unfinished and the shading could use some improvement. :D Cool, though!

--
.:ღ♥Guys are like bras: They hook up behind your back. ~ Paige Catalioto♥ღ:.
Reply
:icontherage3k:
~therage3k Mar 28, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with your unfinished and shading comments. So then I had to load a pic of Fergie and compare... it's weird, there are similarities but Fergie has a more chiseled face.
[link]
Thanks for the feedback!
:matteo: -Woof!

--
TheRage3K
~No religion or group should be judged by its extremists
Reply
:iconwhimsical-soul:
~Whimsical-Soul Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
True. You're welcome!

--
.:ღ♥Guys are like bras: They hook up behind your back. ~ Paige Catalioto♥ღ:.
Reply
:icondollinjune14:
~dollinjune14 Mar 22, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Well, you asked me to write something, but the best thing I can say is I'm not good as a critique , not even when I have to talk about my own stuff. REALLY. There are very good tutorials on traditional art here on dA, the best thing is to find some of those things....
Read a bit about shading and how to work on big surfaces, to get general lightning etc. The proportions are pretty good I think, and the accents of black...
Try to put bigger surfaces of grey, only at the end get to work on highlights and black details. Try to work on bigger "plans" , get the main general-grey tones first. Excuse my english.
And use the mechanical pencil only in the end , for details. Never use (just) HB. Use 2B , 4B, 6B and 8B pencils. They don't scratch the paper, and you can use them to get soft greys up to real black, depends on how "strenght" you use when handle it :)
Thses are general advices much better explained in the tutorials I saw, in a much clearer english :).
:wave:

--
"The true work of art is but a shadow of the divine perfection♥ " - Michelangelo
Reply
:icontherage3k:
Mood: Welcoming ~therage3k Mar 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank You! I understand... there are thousands of tutorials, and I have studied both 2D design and life drawing lightly in college long ago - but hearing from someone at DA that I respect is appreciated! And your English is great. You should hear my Romanian! hahaha...no, you shouldn't :-)

--
TheRage3K
~No religion or group should be judged by its extremists
Reply
:icondollinjune14:
~dollinjune14 Mar 24, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
:laughing:

--
"The true work of art is but a shadow of the divine perfection♥ " - Michelangelo
Reply
:icon:
Add a Comment: